Jorden Falker
English II – Block I
Ms. McKoy
11 September 2013
Is
Any Text Worth It?
Imagine yourself driving down a street; there are runners
training for the next marathon, people taking their dogs to the dog park, and
kids playing kickball peacefully in the field to your right. You notice all of this because you’re driving
with no distractions. Now imagine you
get a text that you think you can reply to quickly with three simple words,
your attention is now focused on answering that text and not the scene around
you. You’re so caught up in answering
that message that you do not notice that the runners are crossing on the
crosswalk that you are supposed to stop at.
You do not notice that the dog somehow managed to get away from its
owner and is running right into the middle of the street. You do not notice that the kickball was
kicked into the road and a child is chasing after it, not paying attention to
cars. Three things that are very important
to notice, but you did not see them because you were texting. You could have ruined someone’s life while answering
that text, but you did not. What about
next time? You got away with it once, so
you could do it again, right? Wrong. Now
picture yourself texting and driving again, but instead of almost harming
others you are only harming yourself.
You do not see the tree that you are about to run into or that you are
headed straight for oncoming traffic.
Texting while driving is like driving with your eyes closed. It is not a matter of if you will get into an
accident because of it; it is a matter of when.
When will you hit something? When will you kill someone? When will your luck run out?
Although I have not ever texted while I was driving, I
know several people who have before and still continue to do so. I’ve been in the car with them before and I
felt anything but safe. When I told
these people to stop texting while they were driving, I got all sorts of silly
replies and responses like “Look! I can still see!” and “No one’s going to get
hurt because of it.” My favorite
response would be “Jorden, I’m still in the lines, relax.” That might have helped me relax if it weren’t
for the fact that we WERE NOT staying in the lines. Like I have said before, texting while
driving is like driving with your eyes closed.
You would never close your eyes while driving, right? When you text and drive, you are doing the
same thing basically.
I have learned multiple things while conducting my
research on texting while driving. During
my research, I came across an article that I not only did it immediately catch
my eye, but I found the facts shocking. According
to the article “Word to Youth: Texting,
Driving Don’t Mix”, “In 2008, 5,870 people died and more than a half-million
were hurt in crashes involving a distracted or inattentive driver.” Mariah West was a teenager killed in a car
crash the night before graduation because she was texting and driving. She was on her way to a baseball game while
texting the player that invited her when she lost control of her car. She was partially ejected and her skull was
crushed. The message she died over:
“Where U At.” Mariah is not the only one; John Bradley Breen was a young marine
and father. He was home on leave while
he was texting and driving. He was
replying “Yeah T-.” when he lost control of his truck and was ejected 200
feet.
The facts have been stated. Texting and driving will kill people. The question is who? Who does it kill? Who does this issue affect more? You or others? It’s true that both groups of people are
killed from this, but I feel that you are more affected by this. You can run into the back of cars, into
objects like trees and walls, and into oncoming traffic. Even if you don’t run into those things, you
can run over other people and possibly kill them because you weren’t paying
attention. Imagine having to live with
the fact that you killed someone because you were too preoccupied texting to
notice them. It seems pretty horrible,
doesn’t it?
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